miércoles, 2 de septiembre de 2009

Post Electoral Issues in Iran

Publicado por Marita en 15:59
Hey guys! Welcome to our profile, in here you will find some interesting information about the country called Iran; first of all we will introduce you to this country so you can know a little bit about it. It is a country located in the northeastern of the Persian golf, its capital is Teheran, and it has been in war for some of the last years. Its language is Persian; it has like 8 million people of population. Then we will focus on a very particular issue, this happened after the elections, when people realized that this elections were stolen, were changed, or modified.


1 comentarios on "Post Electoral Issues in Iran"

Art & Culture on 6 de septiembre de 2009, 16:18 dijo...

Hello!

You present some interesting information but there are certain points you need to improve:
You need to use a more serious tone, you write as if you were speaking in a very informal setting (like, like, like, like).
I strongly suggest you to change the "look" of the blog, it is too informal and not coherent with the topic.
You also need to cite every piece of information you use. Im going to give you several readings and websites so you can obtain more information.
Charlie.

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